Jon free daft of EnglishPrompt2.html (Comments are at the bottom of the page and correspond with the letters throughout the paper)

The first peer review was difficult for me since I didn’t think it’d be helpful for my peers getting my feedback. After other peer reviews I got more confident with my writing and felt better about asking for help and commenting on my peers work. My first peer review wasn’t very helpful however, other peer reviews were more beneficial as they had more useful comments.

I chose one of my peers work from the major second paper we did. Personally this was a prompt I struggled with but after getting help from my peers and editing their work, I was able to improve my writing.  On this work, the writer was struggling with ideas to focus on so he had a lot of good ideas but not a lot of structure. On this peer review, I commented often about expanding on ideas that seemed helpful for my peers claim as well as praising successful claims.